SCRIPT CONSULTING SERVICES SAMPLES

        THE FIRST STEP TO A WELL-CRAFTED AND MARKETABLE SCRIPT:


PAGE-BY-PAGE DEVELOPMENT NOTES (the same extensive work I've done
for studios and producers)
                                                
*Comprehensive notes and specific rewriting suggestions that guide
you towards your next draft

1.
Sample section of Page-by-Page Development Notes for a Romantic
Comedy
2.
Sample section of Page-by-Page Development Notes for a Sitcom
("Coach")
3.
Sample of Page-by-Page Development Notes Comments
    
OR...

MOVE DIRECTLY TO YOUR NEXT DRAFT:

      EXTENSIVE REWRITE - specific rewriting suggestions,
      including structure, storyline, character arcs, dialogue,
      action/description, tone, pacing, cinematic
      narrative, studio-current formating, editing..

    
     Sample of Extensive Rewrite

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INCLUDES A HOUR PHONE CONSULTATION *


STUDIO-LEVEL COVERAGE - highlights strengths and weaknesses, covering
           all screenplay elements, i.e., dialogue,
           action/description, tone, character
           development, pace, structure, budget concerns,
           scene work, commercial appeal, etc.
             
   *Sample of studio-level coverage upon request

FORMATING - your screenplay formated in current studio format