Hey, Jude, I
think my best advice to you is to take a sad song and make
it better. (Sorry, I couldn't help
myself.)
And now to the
business at hand. Treatments, like them or not, are
here to stay in the film industry (at least for the time
being until we screenwriters can teleport our images reading
our treatments to producers' halo decks.) They're the
industry's way of not having to read scripts -- which most
industry people don't like to do. (I know: go
figure.) When the industry shifted to seeking shorter
screenplays (from 120 pages to 110 and, sometimes, even 100
now), it wasn't just about economy of word, conciseness,
taut plots, shorter scenes, supporting the general trend of
viewers having shorter and shorter attention spans, etc., it
was also about the fact that the top people making decisions
were getting younger and younger and wanted to read less and
less.
In fact, usually a producer will ask for a
synopsis instead of a more detailed treatment. When I
was working at Hearst, they stopped wanting to see
three-page synopses and started asking for one page.
One page. Eventually, treatments, synopses, outlines
will all disappear and all that will be left is the infamous
logline. But, then, the logline will get longer and
longer until they become so heavy with commas and semicolons
that producers will have to ask for outlines, then synopses,
then, eventually, treatments again. And, then when the
horror is too great and the producers can't take it any
more, they'll have to return to actually...
READING SCRIPTS
Only
God Can Help Them Now
(that's
a pretty good tagline, I'd say.)
So, how do you
slog your way through a multi-paged treatment?
Detachment. I'll say it (write it) again:
Detachment
Assuming
that you're most likely writing a treatment of a script you
wrote, and, most likely, the script has changed to some
extent in regards to its original outline, you're most
likely (when you write "most likely" three times
in a sentence, I think you get some sort of prize) not all
that excited about writing down the dry skeleton of what
you've already put down in your creative, dramatic,
compelling screenplay.
Let's
face it: that's a drag. You start there:
you don't pretend that you really want to do it. In
fact, admit to yourself and your dog and maybe a stranger on
the street that writing a treatment of your screenplay is
the last thing you want to do!
Okay,
now that you've got that off your chest... detach.
Take at least a week off from looking at the thing (your
screenplay, that is. See how detached you can get?)
and then write out a treatment of the story of that
screenplay as though you didn't write it. That's
right; I said it. Forget that you wrote the script.
In
fact, as you're writing the treatment of this whatever
screenplay, you can let out all your envy and jealousy and
hatred of other screenwriters and dump all of that on the
writer of the screenplay you're doing the treatment
for. Curse that writer; give him both barrels.
Since it's you, the screenwriter, you're putting down, no
karma is produced (and maybe not even the script, too); but
nobody gets hurt. Isn't detachment wonderful?
And, Jude, then you can start...
...
to make it better (naaaah-nah-nah-nah-nah-nah-naaaah....)